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Chapter five:[...]Those who worship the Grain
Goddess are not to destroy for the mere sake of desctruction, nor
are they to destroy without after rebuilding.[...]
Glamerie Windbough, in the temple of Chauntea in Shadowdale, seems human but greets people as they approach even if in the dark, as if she has darkvision![...]hey replant fallen trees
whereever they find the need,[...]
Musical and plaque.[...]Water
spills from the top of the tower and down in to the basin with
a musica splash. On the side of the fountain is a small brass
plague[...]
This guy, a smith, seems to be placed in the wrong room. There is in fact a smithy to the north of it which is deserted, while he stays in a house. I don't know, maybe she moves there during the day, but now it's 7 am in game and he's still at home.A bull-necked man in a leather apron is here.
Disturbing.The sign: [...]Thank you for
thinking better of disturbint my privacy.
I think it should be "paper notes" without the s.[...]Every inch of flat surface in this room is
covered with papers notes and all manner of things
magical.[...]
Also.He seems very good at what he does and he aslo
appears to be sampling more than his share.
Shining and rest. There are two consonants more.This is an average sized room. There are racks of weapons on the walls,
all kept gleaming and shinning. A table sits under the window on the western wall.
Upon the table rests a flute and a lyre along with several sheets of music.
Gamble.Guard's Quarters
N-Servant's Commo
This is a rather Spartan guardroom lined with triple-tiered bunk
beds and crowded with arms chests used as tables. Here the guards
sleep, oil and sharpen their weapons, and ganble stiff sums back
and forth.
Becomes.Conference Room
U-Defense Level D-Hallway in the
Customarily Thurbal's office and Mourngrym's place to hold private
and confidential discussions, this room becoms the center of the
Tower's defense if the Dale is under attack.
I think an "in" at the beginning of the description might sound better.Blast Cavern
N-Storage W-Dungeon Entranc
This large cavern a table with six chairs at which guards
can usually be found playing dice.[...]
Placed.[...]Long benches polished by years of
use and weathering have been places randomly around the floor.[...]
Sworn.l ranger
This human of sturdy built wears simple leather armour
decorated with the symbol of an unicorn head, the symbol
of Mielikki. He is one of the rangers who have swore to
protect the glade and the surrounding woods.
Traverse.A Forest Path
N-A Shrine to Sil E-A Forest Path S-A Shrine to Gwa
This is a path in the woods. The trees on both sides of the path are tall,
and in the distant to the east is a huge tall tree. The undergrowth here is
thin and thus tranverse is easy. To the north and the south are clearings
in the woods.
Shiallia.A druidess of Shillia is here.
Their.Travelers and merchants
with thier carts and wagons wait for entrance as gate guards watch
over everything going on.
The same typo is present also in other guard mobs.Standing alert here is a large guard, wearing a full suit of silvery
chainmail, and a large white tabard embroidered with the symbol of the
city of Darromer. At his side is a large rapier placed in a white sheath.
Competent.A slender a lithe elven woman dressed in the colours of the school.
She stands guard with an unwavering devotion and a steadfast sense of
duty. She looks more than comepetant in a fight.
Competence.A slender and lithe woman with an air of competance and
grace to her. Elven beauty shines clear in this delicate
woman.
Mosaic.The courtyard itself is surrounded by elegant marble
columns and tiled in an elaborate mosiac of semi-precious gemstones, from
the deep blue of lapis lazuli to the pale glitter of quartz.
Colonnades.Marching in perfectly match pairs that stretch out to form the
collonades of the peristyle to the north.
Definite.Long, flowing golden hair and silver eyes, this is a slender
elven woman that has a definate air of maturity and focus to her.
Has.This room as the same look as
the other classrooms, but there is something a bit more intimate, as if the
lessons here are private rather than in groups.
Lilies.Perfectly manicured emerald green grass stretches in all directions,
interrupted only by exquisitely shaped rose bushes and beds of lillies.
Competence.A short and strong looking elven man with an air of
assurance and competance.
And.The walls amd floor are sheathed in pure
marble and the desks are dark hardwood.
Dining.White marble is now accented with hints of silver and ebony in the
great dinning hall of Faerntarn.
Wearing.This master-chef is wearring all white, including a large, puffy hat.
Heraldic.White marbles sheaths the walls which hold a variety of banners,
each depicting the heraldric symbols of the lords that hold
fealty to the Queen.
Incredibly.His clothes
are bright white in color, and increadibly clean.
TheirMerchants and porters
move at a steady pace either displaying thier wares or running goods
from one area to the next.
Likely.Under his left eye is a small
scar, most likly from the blade of a small sword.
Each.The stronghold boasts three towers, eath topped with a
double-ended or horned snow awning that scoops cooling breezes down into the
interior when the trapdoors are open in summer.
Worshippers.he many footprints visible in the
soft ground near the altar shows that many worshipers come here to pay
respect to Chauntea.
I think the y is not necessary here.This Citizen looks very happy to live in one of the safesty and happiest
cities in the world.
Silverware.The rooms is full of court nobles taking part in
an elegant feast on the finest of china and using the most expensive
silverwear.
The first comma should be replaced by a full stop. In the second sentence it seems a "see" is lacking after "can" for it to have sense.You have come to a tall wooden fence surrounding a park like area full
of trees, In the distance you can the white Noble Mounts grazing contentedly.
Built.This tower was originally part of a temple build by Baron Highcastle, founder
of Highcastle.
Required.Some of the Knights that are currently in residence eat here if their
presence is not require at the court dining room.
Than.You are at the center of Highcastle Creek, and you've discovered it was smaller then
you imagined.
Voussoirs.A depressed arch here spans the top of the gateway with gold
plated voissoirs depicting implements of war.
Emblazoned.His robes are emblazzoned with the symbol of Tempus.
Somewhere.This small room's furnace is built against the far wall and
served by two pipes that disappear into the stone to vent
its heat outside somwhere.
Skullcap.He wears a skullcup of steel, robes
bright as fresh arterial blood, and a spiked gauntlet.
Its, without the apostrophe. also "provide" should not have the s, because it has two subjects, hence it is plural.The large portcullis of the High Lady's Castle
N-The Guard Post E-Outside the Hig S-The Guard Post W-The Courtyard o
The palace of the High Lady looms to the west, it's high walls and
elegant lines provides a graceful monument to the beauty of Berdusk.
Frantically.The Kitchens of the High Lady's Palace
E-The Great Hall
The kitchens of the palace are an almost franticly busy place.
Since thou is employed in the sentence before, in my opinion it would sound better as "Wherever thou goest".Outside the Entrance to Roseportal House
N-A Dirt Path E-The Minstrelrid S-Stables W-Roseportal Hous
There is a large garden with a long breeze way circling around it, with
large holes in the ceiling to let the sun enter, and a small church at
the opposite end, to the west. On a sign above the door of the temple
is written: "Strive always to aid, to foster new hope, new ideas,
and new prosperity for all humankind and its allies. Perfect thyself,
and guard ever against pride, for it is a sacred duty to foster new
growth, nurture growing things, and work for rebirth and renewal. Be
fertile in mind and in body. Consider always the consequences of thine
actions so that the least effort may bring the greatest and best
reward. Wherever you go, sow seeds of plants, tend the growing things
you find, and plant seeds of hope, new ideas, and plans for a rosy
future in the minds of all. Whenever possible, see each dawn."
Chimneys.In the middle of the clearing sits a small
log cabin with two fieldstone chimineys.
Just "shop".Temple Shop
E-Stone corridor
Several wooden shelves line the walls of this small shops,
filled with various items for sale.
Placed.A soft yellow cushion has been
place near it to allow the worshippers to kneel and pray.
Self-explanatory.Windows look
out upon the Minstrelride and allow warm sunlight to pour in to the
A long counter stretches across the length of the shop.
Beautifully.In one corner in a trellis that shades a beauifully carved bench.
Serviceable.A middle-aged man with a thick stubble and dark, intelligent eyes. Dressed in
servicable leathers and a brimmed hat, he has the look of a man not unused to
the hardships of the wilds.
Existant est français, en anglais on dit "existent" qui est plus proche au latin.His eyebrows and eyelashes are so pale as to almost seem
non-existant.
There are two withs.A basin of highly polished silver rests on a marble pedestal, the sides of
the basin etched in delicate abstract patterns that have been inlaid with
with delicate traces of sapphire that catch the sunlight in a sparkle of
deep blue.
Patterns.The beautiful flowing and looping patters hold no special
significance other than a testament to the skill of the masons who
worked the stone.
Passage.Hallway
N-Portico S-Guest Room W-Hallway
The austerity of the white marble corridor is relieved by the graceful
tracery incised into the stone. Stout wood doors line the south wall of the
pasasge which continues to the west. Another door is set in the north wall.
Torches burn in the polished brass sconces at regular intervals along the
hallway.
Pristine.Hallway
E-Hallway S-Hallway W-Office
The passage makes a sharp turn here from east to south. Decorative
stone tracery weaves meaningless patterns along the pristing marble walls.
The floor is also of marble and kept equally clean through the efforts of
the pages and junior clergy in training at the temple. A stout wood door
is set in the west wall.
Its, without apostrophe.An ivory staircase winds it's way to the top of the tower, clinging
to the walls in a close embrace.
Various.Shelves and stands around the room hold the varies items
sold here, all neatly arranged and kept in tidy order.
Elegance.A short and lively woman with a bright smile and a merry
laugh. There is an air of grace and elegant to her.
Oversees. The first "some" should be deleted.A large man overseas all the
work going on. It is amazing some that some of these ships even made it back
to port.
Should be like this: "This area was named for Talgath, once a great ladies' man, though he was notThis area was named for Talgoth, once a great ladies man, though he was not
indiscriminate about who's lady it was.
Stands.A small forge stand against one wall with a set of delicate
well made tools carefully placed on a shelf.
Carries.This young black skinned man wears light leather armour and carrys
a whip for use on his many and varied charges.
Its.Two handed swords and other weapons that show heavy use hang from the
walls, sometimes near parts of other weapons that have been destroyed, lending
this place it's name.
Prominent.Spanning three stories high, this is one of the more
prominant buildings around.
Their.Other live goblins and kobolds come and go at a rapid pace carrying
all manner of items in thier arms or in primitive wheelbarrels.
Cornucopia.Mercenaries merge with a
cornecopia of beings doing all sorts of business.
On.One the edges of the disks dance green
marble fish, scales delicatedly patterned in traces of
silver and crushed diamonds, frolicking happily among the
fall of the water.
Meticulous.A broad, open building filled with more shelves than the mind
can comfortably conceive - it has the meliculous, precise layout
achieved only by the obsessive or the true enthusiast.
The first line needs to be removed.A Landing in Wharram's Publishing House
N-Upstairs in Wha E-Upstairs in Wha S-Upstairs in Wha W-Upstairs in Wha
D-Wharram's Publi
A broad, open building filled with more shelves than the mind
A landing overlooking the sprawling expanse of the bookshop
below.
Aquiline.A tall man with a keen expression, a commanding aura and
an aqualine nose.
Again, the first line needs to be removed because it is from the description of Matteus, another mobile of the same area.A bronzed young man with square features and a coarse
A small, dusky skinned man with a mild expression and laughing
eyes. Despite his friendly appearence, he seems very reluctant
to talk, and spends a lot of time playing with his short, iron-
grey hair.
Stands.To one side of the chapel stand a collection of large book-shelves, filled
with a variety of tomes - some in better condition than others.
Shouldn't it be to "the" tower's base?Although it leads directly to tower's base, there the path
terminates.
Give. It's.This average size tree has gently curved and sparse branches that gives
It an upright oval foliage shape. Its wood is green and seems waxy, its
Bark silver-green in colour.
After the comma it is needed a space.Fields Lane
N-Fields Lane E-Animal Handler' S-The market
The cobbles in the street are worn smooth. Fields Lane continues
north to a junction with Horse Way, and into the distance south.
To the east,a board carved with the image of a man taming a wild
beast with a whip and a large piece of meat hangs over a large
barnlike structure.
Through.A large
fireplace with a roasting haunch of venison sizzling over it
sends an appetizing aroma though the air.
Visible.Horse Way is
visable through a door in the southern wall.
It seems sheath is a noun and sheathe is a verb. Here it is required the noun.His belt holds a sheathe for
a longsword and dagger, while he wears a large bastard sword
across his back, with a brace of throwing daggers strapped to
his arms.
Serviceable. Notably.Patting a nearly empty purse, this battlescarred fellow's bright
blue eyes wander over his surroundings with professional curiousity.
His leather armor is worn, yet servicable. Weapons of various types,
most notibly a scimitar and a long leather whip, hang from his belt.
Sheath. See above.Hanging from the rope is a sheathe, where the
knife which gives the mage his nickname rests when not in use.
Recipes.Winston Apothacary
N-Tymora Alley
A large counter of heavy oak stands along the southern wall.
Scattered across the surface are packets of components, recipies,
flasks, and various implements used to create the potions which
are sold in the front of the shop. A large glass case holds
completed potions marked with handwritten labels.
That "and" should be removed.Wearing a simple gown of muslin with small golden rings on her
fingers, this young girl's bright green eyes and are flecked with
golden highlights that match her honey blonde hair.
Apothecary. Powdered.Peering nearsightedly at a parchment scroll, Duneden takes the
ingredients for a potion from a leather satchel marked with the
sign of an apothocary. His long brown robe is stained with
powered components for his potions.
Palor es español. En inglés hay "pallor".His
palor suggests time spent long underground, and his voice is a
mushy cough, as though he has contracted a cold.
The first line should be removed because it is from the description of a mob in a room nearby.This man's face is a tapestry of scars and the warmest color
A patchwork of scars criss-crosses this man's face and while
his armor is bloody, his skin is clean and the blood is deep
ochre. Dents add texture to his once smooth harness, but his
posture is straight and he seems hale.
Separating.A massive barbican of rough stones straddles the Duke's Way,
seperating the outer and inner yards of Castle Daggerford.
Commission. Visible.Farrel's Fine Jewelry and Apparel
E-Hill Road
A large selection of jewellery sparkles in the light of perfumed
oil lamps. Fine silks and brocades are draped over racks, while
a small pile of sketches stands on a table, the latest fashions
of the Kingdoms for the patrons to examine, comission, and enjoy.
Hill Road is visable through the open door to the east.
Visible.A small pouch,
visable on a thong around his neck, clinks musically as he
eyes his surroundings.
Visible.Hill Road
N-Hill Road E-Hill Road W-Water Street
The cobbles of this road are chipped and worn, though places where
the stones are missing have been filled with hard packed dirt. Hill
Road continues north and east. The narrow lane of Water Street
is visable to the west.
Visible.Hill Road
E-Mikitan Shipyar S-Wall Street W-Hill Road
The cobbles of this road are chipped and worn, though places where
the stones are missing have been filled with hard packed dirt. Hill
Road continues to the west. To the south stands Wall Street, where
the River gate is visable in the distance.
Visible.Kaoth Alley
N-The Trade Way E-Water Street S-Wall Street W-Blacksmith's Gu
This narrow alley is unpaved and dreary with smoke and the shadows
of surrounding buildings. A large structure to the west is marked with
the sign of a red anvil. Water Street begins stretches to the east. To
the north, Trade Way gives access to the central part of the hold, while
Wall Street is visable through a narrow opening to the south.
Visible.Blacksmith's Guildhouse
E-Kaoth Alley
Large charred aprons of thick leather hang on hooks set into the
walls. A glowing fire in the center of this barnlike structure
holds implements that are being heated for reforging of tools,
armor and weapons. A large anvil squats next to a barrel of water,
while racks of finished products fill the southern wall. Kaoth
Alley is visable to the east. A narrow counter along the western
wall holds bottles and glasses, for use in sealing contracts
between the guildmembers.
Either is or runs must be chosen, but both don't sound correct to me.The Trade Way
N-Korbus's Fine J E-The Trade Way S-Kaoth Alley W-The Trade Way
Cobbles smoothed and fit perfectly are kept in good repair on this
main route of the hold. Businesses and shops along the road provide
a myriad of sights, sounds, and scents. A glass window in a shop to
the north holds a selection of jewels and fine clothing. Kaoth Alley
is runs south between two buildings. Trade Way continues to the east
and west.
Visible.The Trade Way is visable
through the open door to the south.
Carved.Elegantly carves screens of rich ebony
provide privacy for those who wish to look over their fortunes
without prying eyes watching their every move.
Visible.The High Road is visable through the open door in the western wall.
Conceivable.Large bolts of cloth, in every concievable color, spread over racks
and shelves.
Visible.The High Road
N-The High Road E-Lady Luck Taver S-The High Road W-Rogan Alley
The road is wide and cobbled with smooth stones and shops of every
description line its length. The heavy traffic of citizens, guards.
and traders makes this one of the busiest roads in the hold of
Daggerford no matter the time of day. A tavern with the sign of a
woman standing under a horseshoe is visable to the east. To the west,
a small space between two businesses suggests an alley. The High Road
continues to the north and south.
Missing space and capital letter.The High Road
N-The High Road E-Kryptgarden Scr S-The High Road
The road is wide and cobbled with smooth stones and shops of every
description line its length. The heavy traffic of citizens, guards.
and traders makes this one of the busiest roads in the hold of
Daggerford no matter the time of day. The High Road continues to the
north and south. To the east,A sign with a rolled scroll and inkstained
quill marks a small shop.
Visible.The High
Road is visable to the west.
Visible.Rogan Alley
N-Rogan Alley E-The High Road S-Guild Alley
Hard packed dirt, with the occassional pothole and cobble make
footing on this narrow alley questionable at best. The shadows of
buildings dapple the alley, and a mixture of earth, alcohol, food,
and other more unpleasant smells drift through this narrow corridor
on a fleeting breeze. Rogan Alley continues to the north. High Road
is visable between two buildings to the east, while Guild Alley
stretches south.
Visible.Guild Alley
N-Rogan Alley E-Physician's Ord S-The Trade Way W-Oleg's Weaponfo
This narrow alley is cobbled, though the cobbles are loose and
shift with every step. The well-maintained pavement of The Trade
Way is visable to the south. The hardpacked dirt of Rogan Alley
is visable to the north. A small shop marked with a hammer and
anvil, with a glowing sword, is visable to the west. The scent
of disinfectant drifts on the breeze from the east, where a
long barracks is marked with the sigil of healers.
Visible.Guild Alley is visable through the western door.
Visible.Rogan Alley is visable through a dimly lit
door to the east.
This sentence doesn't sound good to me.His belt holds a variety of instruments which look like
the should be used by an executioner.
Painted, behind, visible.Barracks
N-Darkness
Bunk beds stand in military rows in this large structure. The only
concession to decoration of the plain whitewashed walls is the symbol
of Daggerford pained just behide a large table in the southern end of
the hall. Racks for weapons and armor are located at the side of each
bunk, while chests for other items are visable under the bunks. The
drill field is visable through the open doors to the north.
And. Visible.Mariner's Alliance
S-Wall Street
This large chamber has a nautical theme and feel. Portraits of ships
in all sorts of weather, nets, adn instruments of the life of the sea
hang along the walls, while a large cabinet of fine liquors stands
along the northern wall. Charts and invoices for cargo are stacked
neatly on a brass bound captain's desk. Wall Street is visable through
the round porthole cut in the ship's door to the south.
Adventurers.Wielding an awl and a large needle, this balding halfling's hands
are tough as the leather he shapes into durable merchandise for
purchase by townsmen and adventueres. [...]
Than.Aldo the Dung Sweeper nods at the sprawling mountain of trash.
Aldo the Dung Sweeper says to you 'We all know better then to go too deep into Rat Hill, dangerous things lurk inside.'
Aldo the Dung Sweeper asks you 'You have the means to go much deeper then we, will you find out what has happened?'
Wasn't written somewhere on the forum that Maztica in FK has not already been discovered?Thelonius says to you 'Here the Faerunian Pantheon, but also the Maztican, Mulhorandi, Zakharan,'
Visible.In the distance to the northwest, the glimmer of Waterdeep's
tallest buildings is visable.
Definite. Abruptly. Controlled.There is a definate change in the neighborhood as you move on to Cutlass
Lane. Things very adruptly become very clean and very bright. The neighborhood
is quiet, but quiet in a controled and disciplined way rather than in a
fashion that feels threatening.
Definite.An elegant and graceful man wih a definate air of rakish
amusement to him.
Back to Daggerford, Ducal Palace, Lower Hall:[...]Warm oak and brass
accents. A gleaming counter stretches along the length of the shop,
manned at all times by friendly staff members who cater to the needs
of the cliental, no matter how odd they may seem at times. [...]
Generations.The stones
of the floor have been worn smooth by the passage of genrations.
On.Auntie Glimbell rummages in the mountain of things one her back.
Auntie Glimbell says to you 'Now see these buckles. I go them off some old armor someone threw out. The armor was rubbish, have no doubt. But not these buckles.'
Moradin's.You pray at the hearth and ask for Moradins blessing.
Sconces.Wrought iron scones hold torches that do not
smoke or burn down.
Provide.Trees surrounding the square provides the shade for a
serene path for strolling about after a week of studying in the library or
to discuss scholarly priestly matters.
The article is not needed. Litter. For the last sentence to have sense the full stop should be replaced by a comma.The armoursmiths are hammering hard steel on an
anvils, shaping the molten steel. Tools, barrels and equipment littter the
room. Along with shelves and racks holding the finished armour along with
the unfinished.
Bookshelves.To the
left is a long glassed topped counter and a series of bookselves.
Commercial.Finlisker Street
N-Finlisker Stree E-Tantras Ale wor S-Finlisker Stree W-Warehouse
Finlisker Street runs to the north and south here. This is a quiet area
with little traffic, growing more commerical as it approaches the docks.
To the west is some sort of warehouse. The scent of the sea begins to
grow stronger here.
Expression.A tall and stern man wearing the robes of a priest of Tempus. He has a commanding
air and a forbidding experssion. Not a man to be trifled with.
Its.It atmosphere is very low key,
fights are not tolerated, but almost any amusement can be purchased
for the right amount of coin.
Benevolent. Passions.Sune is a benevolant [...] deep passsions
In. Sune's.that makes all beings n a locale happier, [...]with a task or the
role of Sune;s champion,
Acquired. After spells a verb like "means" is needed for the sentence to have sense.and an aquired imperfection
that can not be masked or healed by spells or other means of shapeshifting spells
the end of a Sunites priest's career.
One's. Impossible. Than. Wherever.It issues from the core of ones being and shows
ones fair or foul face to the word. [...] and following ones heart [...]imposible love[/color] being [...] Love none more then yourself [...] Encourage beauty whereever you find it [...] whenever
and whereever you find them. [...]
Notable. Windows.Xoth Avenue
N-The Hammer and E-Xoth Avenue W-Xoth Avenue
The houses along this street are noteable for their lack of windows.
Almost all the houses have no window to speak of, while others have
small slits. You suspect this may be where the dwarven artisans live
while in the city.
Favoured.This tavern is favoure by adventurers
The first table needs to go.Comfortable leather seats before a clean and white table clothed
table are set up here.
It needs a capital there.The only
light in the room can be found from above. a chart of the stars covers the
ceiling as if it were the night sky, along with a larger light to represent
the moon in the center.
This sentence doesn't sound good to me.He walk seems unused to the load,
I think there should be another word there.Her eyes are a are a bright green that shimmer like
the new spring grass.
Avariel.Ithil Tinta says to you 'Blessed are we to have an Avarial as a teacher here.'
Noticeably.Gatehouse Tunnel
E-Lower Yard W-Before the Gate
Even on the hottest days of summer, it is noticably cooler within this
tunnel.
The t is not needed. Wast and didst are second person singular forms, their usage with the third person is wrong, i.e. thou wast/didst vs. he was/did.In the past, He wast greatly
venerated by those who serve as guards and protectors. [...] the Great Guard wast left [...] Verily didst [...]
Same as explained above.the land wast stricken [...] wast
left with His power
What's an easil?This spacious room has many a rare painting on an easil, and many a well-spun,
elaborate tapestry.
Extravagant.extravagent jewellery.
Necessities.and a large overstuffed traveller's pack full of
travelling necesseties
Clear.it is clears
Fidgets.A trainee priest of Waukeen fidgits nervously.
Myriad.t is filled with a
miriad of objects for sale,
Can't. Has.though one cant tell [...] which as a silver handle
Holds.where the
king hold public audiences.
Either "stone that is cut" or "stones that are cut".The stairs are made of stone that are cut
Frantically. Keep's.franticly trying to prepare the keeps next meal.
Family's.and a door leads
into what must be the royal families private rooms.
Fugitive.The guards spot a fugutive and swarm them!
Water.The ankle-deep dark sewer waters gives off an acrid smell.