Melisinder (Faerdale)
Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 4:25 pm
I'd just like to make a suggestion of tacking on an extra line at the end of or prior to their text. They suggest...
Melisinder carefully cleans an unusual dagger here.
Melisinder says to you 'Welcome to my not so humble shop.'
Melisinder asks you 'Can I interest you in one of my magical weapons?'
I traded in one item for a piece there no trouble.
You give an item to Melisinder.
Melisinder says to you 'My thanks to you Trast.'
Melisinder gives you an item in return.
Obviously edited there. No prompt that there was not the ability to gain another item until...
You give another item to Melisinder.
Melisinder says to you 'I am sorry but you already have one of my weapons.'
Melisinder still took the item I gave without returning it. These were two different items, so it was not gaining the same unique item twice. As I said, a prompt before /after the text would be appreciated so others don't have items ate. I'd suggest before so they can pick exactly which one they want.
Melisinder carefully cleans an unusual dagger here.
Melisinder says to you 'Welcome to my not so humble shop.'
Melisinder asks you 'Can I interest you in one of my magical weapons?'
I traded in one item for a piece there no trouble.
You give an item to Melisinder.
Melisinder says to you 'My thanks to you Trast.'
Melisinder gives you an item in return.
Obviously edited there. No prompt that there was not the ability to gain another item until...
You give another item to Melisinder.
Melisinder says to you 'I am sorry but you already have one of my weapons.'
Melisinder still took the item I gave without returning it. These were two different items, so it was not gaining the same unique item twice. As I said, a prompt before /after the text would be appreciated so others don't have items ate. I'd suggest before so they can pick exactly which one they want.