A paladin of Tyr opens the steel gates.
"A paladin of Tyr opens gates to the Halls of Justice for they day."
they should be the, and there should probably be a "the" in front of gates, at least to keep in line with the first statement.
Halls Of Justice - Opening Of The Gates in Morning
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Halls Of Justice - Opening Of The Gates in Morning
"This girl is...remarkably prudent...sheds many tears; has a happy expression..."
Duh Duh Duh DUT *ChickChick*
"I Live to Serve."
"Oh, by the way-you're under arrest."*Chuckle*
Duh Duh Duh DUT *ChickChick*
"I Live to Serve."
"Oh, by the way-you're under arrest."*Chuckle*
Re: Halls Of Justice - Opening Of The Gates in Morning
Fixed.
"A man may die yet still endure if his work enters the greater work, for time is carried upon a current of forgotten deeds, and events of great moment are but the culmination of a single carefully placed thought." - Chime of Eons