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Priest of Gond in golden oaks is not flagged as a gond worshipper so you can faith apply at him.

RID Brigandine armor from tower creature in Rathill

It is armor made *my sandwiching metal plates between two layers
of quilted cloth, thereby concealing some of its nature.

*by

Waterdeep gate guards

Vague of visage behind a half visor that rests on the crests
of his cheeks, this man could be any of the hundreds of tall
and well-built *man who don the shirt of black scales and man
the walls of Waterdeep. His armor is blazoned with a pattern
of nine silver stars, marking him as in Waterdeep's service,
and the knuckles of his gloves are chapped and worn, marking
him as busy in that duty.

*men

Enslaved elf - Zhentil newbie training area
She looks like she has been beaten into submission. She has been
brought in for *your to train your new found fighting skills on.

*yu

During learning about Oghma at the Font...

The Font weaponmaster wipes at his bro and looks up to you, setting the weapon aside for the moment.

Should be brow!

Yemin wrote:Enslaved elf - Zhentil newbie training area
She looks like she has been beaten into submission. She has been
brought in for *your to train your new found fighting skills on.

**yu

**you

Oh nice, must've been tired

Dwarves of the guilded lotus
A very hairy, muscle-bound gold dwarf slaps about *its patrons.
You poke *it in the ribs.
*him or her

Male drow soldiers of Alaren

This male sits confidently atop the back of a massive war lizard,
his eyes scanning the area for any signs of trouble. Resting under his
left arm is the butt of a wicked black lance, while on his right side
he apparently has sheathed a small shortsword. A suit of dark
adamantine chainmail shimmers in the faerie fire of the city, exposing
the insignia of *the his noble house.

*insignia of his noble house.

Praur Simu in westgate
Short and stout of build, this man has a face dominated by a cruelly hooked and broken nose. His sandy blonde hair has been greased and smells strongly of oil. Watering brown eyes are bloodshot and large pouches under these *obs stand out on his flesh. His clothing is threadbare and would blend well in crowds.

*orbs

Jamal's House- Westgate
Outside is fine, but inside door produces.
You open the to Jamal's House.
clo e
You close the to Jamal's House.

Font of knowledge - Waterdeep

the doors to the recently added section =
The pair of doors shaped *lik a giant book is closed.
*like

For the quest in Hartsvale.

The fish monger says to you 'giants have started to harras* and kill my'

*harass

It is phonetic; he's using newsspeak, i.e. HAIRass, not HArass

So Risaufein's drow heavy crossbows today, first the quarrel:

a heavy crossbow quarrel is made for a heavy crossbow
It can be picked up, held.
It cannot be worn with any other armour.
It is medium in size and would fit any body type.
{80)A well made quarrel for a heavy crossbow lies here.

This typo in the code causes in fact the description to appear white, instead of the gray-black of all the other descriptions for quarrels and crossbows.

Also the crossbow:

It is a heavy crossbow in the clubs category of weapons.
It can be picked up, held, held in both hands.
It cannot be worn with any other armour.
It is medium in size and would fit any body type.
It is heavy crossbow of drow make. It stock is made of wood while the
other parts are made of dark metal.

It is a heavy crossbow of drow make. Its stock is made of wood while... etc.

Also, again about the Trader's Tunnel in Menzoberranzan, in the last three rooms near the slavers' gate it is now quite a while that mobs are getting trapped there without ever exiting afterwards. This causes many issues, first and foremost a monstrous scroll in those three rooms, both in the look output, and even in the room itself, with mobs continuosly going to and fro, as they all en masse walk in those three rooms. On a second, and not less important, note they also are problematic because they often interfere with each other concerning with the quests tied to them or to the slavers. Yesterday a new drow tried to solve the quest of the escaped kobold and suddenly he engaged the kobold and then an ogre attacked him! On a third level, also, they even destroy the atmosphere, for example with the wandering thieves and wizards now crammed all in those three-four rooms, and thus, mostly unnoticed by anyone.

Large bottle of spiced Calim wine:

is easily discernable

Discernible.


Cup of jasmine tea (from Aelskiath), in the vendor's list:

a cup of sassafras tea 1sp, 9cp
9) a cup of black tea 2sp, 3cp
10) a cup of saffron tea 2sp, 5cp
11) a cup of jasmine tea 3sp, 1cp

In my humble opinion, in the jasmine tea, the part "a cup of" should be in brown as for the other teas. (I tried to reproduce the colours as best as I could to make clear what I mean).

Zhentil Keep:

Ganthra Blackbeard the dwarven trader is here.

And then I look at her:

This short half-elven woman is clad in a long dark green robe
with silver trim. She wears white and green gloves made of the finest
silk.

Dwarven of half-elven?

Mug and Mutton tavern:

the nose is at
once assault upon entering.

Assulted?

Upon entering in the temple of Cyric:

A priest of Cyric says to you 'You look like you have some talent,'
A priest of Cyric says to you 'though I doubt its much.'

It's

Temple of Cyric, Watch room

A large desk sits in the corner
where. the Captain of the Watch can often be found going through
his paperwork for the day.

The full stop after "where" should be removed.

Prosperity Merchandising

each pai+nstakingly

No plus.

Zhentil Avenue, east of the Common Square:

Those traveling
along here and forced to chose between

Choose

Mace Way at the corner with Twilight Street:

although
a fresh (less stale) breeze from the wide open areas far off
to the south do help ameliorate the nauseating stench.

A breeze does help.

Hadriel in Mace Way:

This woman is as tall and as fit as a man-at-arms, but where
he might have callouses[...]

... she.

Stableboy in ZK Fighters Guild:

He wears torn and tatered clothing but unlike everyone else, his is not
embossed with the guild's symbol.

Tattered with two t's. Also I don't know if in English it is okay to say simply "his" instead of "his one".
I leave this to the judgement of you natives.

Stables where is a lady named Lisini (and the same in the room nearby with Rossi)

Dark paneled wood coveres both floor and walls,

Covers.

Same area again:

Entry Hall
E-Atrium W-Portico
This broad entry hall is all soaring arches and graceful lines, done
in stark black marble that gives a very elegant as a result of the
austere nature of the material.

Gives a very elegant what? [Same also in the "Grand Hall room to the east]

Trinia:

resolve and
competance.

Competence.

Lizzi:

but never managers
to touch her eyes.

Manages.

Stormmistress of Umberlee (Mace Way):

a scowl that
might stop short a veteran sailor with is pronouncement of a
coming storm,

His.

Courtyard in ZK Purple Haze

with water gently flowing
down it's edges

Its.

Dasiana in The Purple Haze:

[...] Beneath her brow.
This girl is wondrously adorned with a mop of unruly golden-
red hair that shames the dim colors of the world around her.

No full stop.

Dock Street, first room:

The eastern side of the road sports a
grand facade - the Riverside Theatre in all its shabby glory
and bygone splendor.

Point is that the Riverside Theatre is on the western side of the road.

Dock guard:

clutching a long
steel halbert.

Halberd

One-eyed halfling trader in trident avenue:

entriely removed his eyeball.

Entirely. I have also noticed that in his inventory he has got an additional veil and an additional hennin, that he does not have in his shop list.

Gap-toothed old ferryman (on Pier Two):

you can see that most of his teeth
are either missing of partially cloven from his mouth.

Or.

Barge Street (South from the crossroad with Baron's Street)

Several stone buildings at built into a horse-shoe structure

Are.

Audience Chamber:

This is a large and especially opulant room [...] raised dias

Opulent. Dais.

Guard Captain's Quarters:

a detailed map of
Waterdeep and it's surrounding area

Its.

Ishak says to you 'I can run you to the Black Sun's temple, the square, the cemetary, or the corpse conservatory in the city for only a gold piece paid.'

Cemetery.

Also in Zhentil Keep's cemetery there is a room called "Cemetary" instead of the correct "Cemetery".

A brief stop in Westgate's temple of Loviatar, in the Kitchen precisely:

The wonderful smells of baked bread wafts through the air here.There are a few
plates and pots strewn about.

After "here" there should be a space.

(8935) River rocks enclose a cheery little fire pit. (very good)
LOOK PIT
Smooth stones from a river bed have been mortared in place to create a safe
fire pit from which cook can be safely conducted. Log surround the pit for
ready seating.

cook -> cooking
Log -> Logs

Deeping dale bard at center of town.
When speaking of the deeping princess its the last but one block of text and the last instance of asking for a yes input.

A half-elven bard asks you 'Do you want me to *continued?'

*continue

Room short desc on the road leading west of Lhork:

LoudThe Trackless Sea
N-The River Shini E-South Wood S-South Wood W-The Delimbiyr R
NE-Dawn Pass TrailNW-The River ShiniSE-South Wood SW-River Delimbiyr
The road is clear of grass and heavily rutted from the passage of many
wagons bearing their heavy loads. There are several potholes that you
must take care to avoid tripping in.

Should maybe be Loudwater?

2624 - Sergeant's Office
A cluttered slab of stone serving as a desk, with an old wooden crate as a
chair, this sergeant's office obviously has been used roughly. Broken stone
lies around the room, some stained dark with blood. A rancid odor is coming
from what appears to be a hastily abandoned meal of rotten meat. The cleaner
air of the main barracks lies to the northeast.

lies to the northeast -> lies below

In the leather armour set sold by Friam in Golden Oaks the gloves have the description in white, while all the other parts of the armour have it in brown. I think the gloves should have a brown description too.

Again in Golden Oaks, in the area with the monsters there is a room with altered spacing in the description to the north-west:

Thick forest
N-Thick forest E-Thick forest
You are in the heart of the forest. Nothing in sight but trees. From time
to time, you hear the noise of a branch breaking, under the non tactful foot

of a creature wandering nearby. Looking around, you catch sight of a Kobold,
half hidden behind a hollow tree, looking curiously at you. You could not
say if he is ready to flee or to come to you and attack you.

As you can see there is a blank line which is wrong.

Express deliveries:
Mondain says to you 'I do not have any *mission for you right now.'

*any missions
*a mission

All 4 workers on the top floor have this typo.