Mega thread: Rainy day simple fixes

[Harroghty]

Just imagine the description being read with a thick Russian accent...

[Zethanon]

Just imagine the description being read with a thick Russian accent...

It's a treat, truly.

Good on you, Yemin, I missed that part!

[Yemin]

Just imagine the description being read with a thick Russian accent...

NOW THATS THE SPIRIT!

[Vaemar]

Eveningstar Wizardwerks in Luskan:

This shabby tower appears to have seen it's better days, with squeaking
shutters and peeling paint on the outside of it's broad,

Its. (Same story in the room above it with the same description).

Again, Luskan, the Leaden Flautist:

It's function is quite obvious upon entering,

Its.

School of Wonder:

Merry says to you 'Comitting a spell to memory is only the first'
Merry says to you 'step. You will then need time before the'
Merry says to you 'is ready to be cast. Meditation can help'
Merry says to you 'you shorten that time.'
Merry says to you 'Try this mantra now.'

before the spell is ready.

Jackal:

It looks like a dog, with short hair and enormous ears. It's fur
is the color of the desert sand.

Its.

[Danik]

A lose (loose) braided copper circle rests here. (perfect)

[Yemin]

Deity section east - Waterdeep museum
A painting of a Lolth hangs here. (perfect)
Of Lolth

l plaque
Lolth, also *know as the the Spider Queen or Demon Queen of Spiders, is the goddess of drow elves and spiders. She cherishes chaos, darkness and assassins. She is known to thrive on the death, destruction and torture of all beings, including those amongst her worshipers who have displeased her. She is promoted over all beings by her followers, who worship her for the power she grants, and out of fear. Her clerics control most drow cities, acting as rulers, judges and executioners in *the drow society.

*Known
*in Drow society

A painting of a Talos hangs here. (perfect)
Of Talos -(Spanish accent added. Sounds fantastic)
l statue
ABC.
l plaque
DEF.
Er.., Well, if you insist...,
https://www.youtube.com/user/kidscamp?v=vVNfqd0LRGo

Known as the Merchant's Friend, Waukeen is the goddess of trade,
wealth and money. Or more likely was, for She is missing, having
disappeared on the Year of Shadows, when the gods walked the
Kingdoms. Before She went missing, *She was the teaching that the mercantile trade is the best road to enrichment. She is known to love fair trades above all, and to punish those who *tries to harm or hinder trades, by spreading rumors or through sabotage for example. She encouraged her followers to give money freely to
businesses and beggars alike, to show others the wealth than her
worship can provide, and to increase the buying capacity of all
beings: if everyone is rich, there is less tendancy for hoarding
and hiding riches. One of her known phrase is : 'The bold find
gold, the careful keep it... and the timid yield it up.'.

* she taught that
*try to

Yondalla is the mother goddess of all halflings, the *Nuturing Matriarch, also known as the Blessed One. Known as the Provider, she is the Goddess of birth and youth, of growth and fertility, of families, familial love and prosperity. She is said to watch over growing fields. She is also known as the Protector, Goddess of leadership, diplomacy, harmony and protection. She gives halflings the strength to defend themselves and protects them against evil influences and intrusions.

*nurturing

Top floor
A marble statue of Finder Wyvernspur is here on a stone dais. (perfect)
A museum librarian sells books here.
l statue
.

Silvanus and eldath's plaque:
necessary to achieve that goal, including changing *side as needed. It
* changing sides

Top floor,: Myrkul's Statue desc
His head is decorated with
a *drown of horns and his face is a foul grin.
*crown
Myrkul's plaque
Finally he was defeated by the Mage Midnight over Waterdeep during the
Time of *Trouble, when the gods walked Faerun.
*Troubles

Liera's statue desc:
The statue shows a very tall, very thin woman with long flowing hair.
She wears long purple robes whose lower part can't be seen, as it seems to be shrouded *is mists. She has large black glistening and piercing eyes. The woman seems to *make one with the mist that surrounds her.
*with
*make / be

Mystryl's statue desc:
This statue shows a beautiful human female with burning blue eyes. She has *a radiant skin, as well as *a long, rainbow-colored hair. She wears simple, but elegant, blue-white robes of the finest heavy silk. She stands, bare feet, on grass. Her hands hang in the air, as if she was caught in the middle of a complex incantation.
*too many As

tyche's plaque:
Tyche, former Goddess of All manner of luck good and bad was both *adverturous and fickle. Tyche was alledgedly *striken by the rot of Moander after placing a flower *ensarned with his essence in her hair.
*adventurours
*stricken
*no clue what that last one is, ... suggested - Infused

Maglubiyet's plaque:
with iron fist
*with an iron fist

Deneir is a stern deity, believing in a process and * steps that *
*the steps

* pats self on back and goes to get milkshake

[Yemin]

carefully places an uncooked raspberry tart near the fire and *let it bake.

*lets

[Vaemar]

Fiddlebenders Mystery Brew:

This greenish concoction was brewed by a gnome called Fiddlebender
who's air ship crashed in Kuldahar. Since the crash he has taken
up residence in the community of Kuldahar brewing all manner of
concoctions including potions and drinks.

Whose.

[Yemin]

Hartsvale-
Jharnik looks to have veeberg blood in his veins. He is not overly tall
however. His hands are small and *handle* is delicate goods well.
*handles his delicate goods

[Yemin]

$$$$$ rubs her belly *unconsiously.
*unconsciously

[Lysha]

Camberdan asks you 'Come on then, girl, do you want some kit for the road?'

Should be a kit, not some, no?

[Lirith]

Camberdan asks you 'Come on then, girl, do you want some kit for the road?'

Should be a kit, not some, no?

Kit can be used as plural as well as singular. Both would be correct.

[Ungtar]

Ulrek Svitpisht exclaims to Orean 'It's the motherload!!

Proper terminology is mother LODE as in a lode of metal.

[Yemin]

Melchin in Silverymoon
This half-elf looks like he is at least 60 *year old. He seems to
be spending all his days bent down, looking at the ground around
here. He wears a simple grey robe with many mud stains.

*years

[Yemin]

Debbn in applehill
Debbn says to you '*Thank to you, I feel much better now.'
*Thanks

[Yemin]

First floor of undermountain:
This brown flickering portal must be one of the many *teleporation
devices that Halaster placed in his domain. The only way to learn where it might lead might be to enter it.

*teleportation

[Yemin]

Undermountain first floor
Door next to most southern Xorn has no desc.

Prisoner:
This middle-adged human must have been a would-be adventurer captured by
the goblins and left to rot in this cell. He has a long unshaven and dirty
beard and his clothes are reduced to rags.
A prisoner is in perfect health.
This middle-*adged human must have been a would-be adventurer captured by the goblins and left to rot in this cell. He has a long unshaven and dirty beard and his clothes are reduced to rags.

*aged

[Yemin]

Rolf - Waerdeep
This man is filthy and smells like * rubbish heap, he stands in rags next to his cart

*a rubbish heap.

[Svenrick]

Its a bit pedantic, but I noticed this whilst browsing Betandor's Guide to a Good Adjective:

[Second paragraph]

"As another example, many characters who play evil seem to want the adjective
menacing or something which means the same thing, and those who play good
alignment always seem to want kind or some other similar word to describe
them. These are two examples of suspect adjectives, because no one can be
*manacing all of the time, or kind all of the time either."

*menacing

[Ungtar]

Applehill temple of Garl:

Longdesc of Feasthall

Silver plates and untencils(sic)

Should be utensils.